I am making a storie e mail me if you want a part

[Morzan]

 As I said in the other topic, I can help you out Bladetail. Ignore Razor, but Kilk is right. It needs a few touch ups on the grammer and plot. I can help, I used to write stories about RWL too, though they were a tad longer. My aim is Catfoodmade4dogs. IM me and I can try to help you out. Don't get discouraged, like I said before, post good and you will gain respect. The great comunity of RWL is always cruel to newbies, or most of the time at least. At least in these days you aren't claimed. The people of RWL enjoy scaring off newbies so they can hold on to their 40 player based game. Don't get angry, and even PM or AIM me so I can give you a few pointers. Really most of us are nice, and the other ones just enjoy being bullies to newbies. Just throw witty remarks back.  

[windhound]

 -.-
we arnt cruel ta newbies..  Neo was a newbie not too long ago and I never once saw somone be overly mean to him just 'cause he was new..  Neo can spell and use correct grammer and is almost always nice 'n' polite..  not to mention a good player..  

thoes people who come in and say things like OMG IMa nEWBIEEE  paY mEE attTention be4 I pas oUT  
annoy me..  

if you're new just be nice and use correctish grammer, otherwise people will either ignore or critisize your posts..  and if you go flaming everyone expect to be flamed..

not all that applies to bladetail ofcourse, but to new members in general..  

[RazorClaw]

 I'll be comic relief of some sort...

[Guthorm Swordmaster]

 Yea RazorClaw is comic relief if its not pointed at you.

[RazorClaw]

 No, sorry, I have to be a sadistic character that makes funny comments but never smiles named Ronarev.

[Veranor]

No, sorry, I have to be a sadistic character that makes funny comments but never smiles named Ronarev.

Are you sure you know what sadistic means? You enjoy causing pain?  

[RazorClaw]

 Sadistic, Sarcastic, whatever. Didn't get much sleep... Sarcastic, I meant.

[Bladetail the Ferret]

 cool!!!!!! I will try to be nicer and better  in the grammar

[Ashyra Nightwing]

 I'll be a guard, please?

[Bladetail the Ferret]

 Look on page 1 towards the bottom that will give you the answer ::cries::  

[Arguia Zsah]

 Can I be the evil empress evryone bows down in front of? heeheehee!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Bladetail the Ferret]

 does anyone ever listen I am not doing a story because no one ever does any thing but critisize it!!!!

[Wolf Snare]

 Aww... Come on, I'm sure this story could be really good! Why don't you start over, and write it? I think people will be nicer this time, aswell.  *prods*
But yes, better grammar would be appreciated. Perhaps you could send me your story once you finish it, (if you decide to) and I'd be glad to edit it. I'm not much of a story writer online, but have written many Redwall stories in my time.
So what do you say, Ol' chap? Why don't we give it another try? :)  

[RazorClaw]

 Ask people for tips on AIM and stuff. Don't be discouraged!

[Nohcnonk]

does anyone ever listen I am not doing a story because no one ever does any thing but critisize it!!!!

You could send it to me and I'd fix it up for sure. ^_^