In Spa Room 101, Might need it later for....

Deathclaw · May 14, 2003, 07:13:38 AM

The vermin charged.
The defenders came.
Blood spattered,
Like the rain.
A haze of blood,
Fogging the sky red.
Many would eternally go to bed.
Spears glinted,
Swords clashed.
The weather battered,
Limbs lashed.
The cries rang out,
The seas flowed red.
When it was all over,
Evil still wasn't dead.
It never would be,
It would rise once more.
Fighting it would be,
Losing once more.

RazorClaw · May 14, 2003, 05:50:59 PM

That's creepy. But it's good.

Mark · May 16, 2003, 06:24:26 AM

I think it's pretty witty! I like it...I think you've got a talent for that kinda thing

windhound · May 16, 2003, 11:19:28 AM

not bad, I agree that it's kinda creepy though...
meh. still, nice job with it

General Austin · May 16, 2003, 01:01:15 PM

Good job.

big bad rat man · May 16, 2003, 01:02:42 PM

i lick it. u shold post more peotry on here. everybody shold.

General Austin · May 16, 2003, 01:13:28 PM

*thwacks rat man* It should be like this:

I (remember capitalization) like it. You (NOT "u") should post more poetry on here. Everybody should.

PLEASE try to write better, as it makes this whole forum easier to read.
*hopes he did it as well as Calria would have*

big bad rat man · May 16, 2003, 01:16:08 PM

u're stupid. nobpody carez how i type. u cn undrestand meh, kant u?

General Austin · May 16, 2003, 01:19:55 PM

Yes, of course I can! :snicker:

Your sentence SHOULD be like this:

You're nice. Nobody cares how I type. You can understand me, can't you?

big bad rat man · May 16, 2003, 01:21:00 PM

then shut upp! u ned 2 git a life.,;

General Austin · May 16, 2003, 01:23:09 PM

YOU SHUSH UP!! *kicks newbie out of forum*

"Then Shu- up! You need to get a life."

Ashyra Nightwing · May 16, 2003, 01:38:21 PM

One IMPORTANT rule of newbness. Never, I repeat NEVER insult an oldbie.

And we can hardly understand you. If someone corrects you, they are doing it to help you.

joe34 · May 16, 2003, 01:41:46 PM

HEY!1! dont inslt my bruthr! u r soooo stoopid, my brother ROKS at tis game!1!!11! he'l kill yu ALL :angry: :angry:

big bad rat man · May 16, 2003, 01:42:51 PM

wel he inslutted meh so i cn say watevr i wnat 2 him ok?
an i m not a 'newb' or watevr u ppl cal that i am gud at rwl. rel gud.

windhound · May 16, 2003, 01:43:24 PM

big bad rat man and joe34, ye both are big annoying newbies and should be thrown as soon as possible into a fresh pile of rat dung

Quoteu're stupid. nobpody carez how i type. u cn undrestand meh, kant u?

wazzat? I'm all confuzzled... who/what is nobpody? no potty? meh.