In Spa Room 101, Might need it later for....

Started by Deathclaw, May 14, 2003, 07:13:38 AM

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Deathclaw

 The vermin charged.
The defenders came.
Blood spattered,
Like the rain.
A haze of blood,
Fogging the sky red.
Many would eternally go to bed.
Spears glinted,
Swords clashed.
The weather battered,
Limbs lashed.
The cries rang out,
The seas flowed red.
When it was all over,
Evil still wasn't dead.
It never would be,
It would rise once more.
Fighting it would be,
Losing once more.
Glory, Glory, Man United!

RazorClaw


Mark

 I think it's pretty witty! I like it...I think you've got a talent for that kinda thing
Originally The Black Rider, Fonder of Nazgul?.

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windhound

 not bad, I agree that it's kinda creepy though...
meh.  still, nice job with it
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General Austin

In God I trust, and in Him alone shall I put my faith.

big bad rat man

 i lick it. u shold post more peotry on here. everybody shold.
i m th big bad rat man n i will baet u up so dun mess wit me cuz i will beat u up.

im teh big bad rat man.

General Austin

 *thwacks rat man* It should be like this:

I (remember capitalization) like it. You (NOT "u") should post more poetry on here. Everybody should.

PLEASE try to write better, as it makes this whole forum easier to read.
*hopes he did it as well as Calria would have*
In God I trust, and in Him alone shall I put my faith.

big bad rat man

 u're stupid. nobpody carez how i type. u cn undrestand meh, kant u?
i m th big bad rat man n i will baet u up so dun mess wit me cuz i will beat u up.

im teh big bad rat man.

General Austin

 Yes, of course I can! :snicker:


Your sentence SHOULD be like this:

You're nice. Nobody cares how I type. You can understand me, can't you?
In God I trust, and in Him alone shall I put my faith.

big bad rat man

i m th big bad rat man n i will baet u up so dun mess wit me cuz i will beat u up.

im teh big bad rat man.

General Austin

 YOU SHUSH UP!! *kicks newbie out of forum*


"Then Shu- up! You need to get a life."
In God I trust, and in Him alone shall I put my faith.

Ashyra Nightwing

 One IMPORTANT rule of newbness. Never, I repeat NEVER insult an oldbie.

And we can hardly understand you. If someone corrects you, they are doing it to help you.


joe34

 HEY!1! dont inslt my bruthr! u r soooo stoopid, my brother ROKS at tis game!1!!11! he'l kill yu ALL :angry:  :angry:  
GENEFORGE, RULER OF ALL THE NORTLANS!!!!!!!11!!!1


big bad rat man

 wel he inslutted meh so i cn say watevr i wnat 2 him ok?
an i m not a 'newb' or watevr u ppl cal that i am gud at rwl. rel gud.
i m th big bad rat man n i will baet u up so dun mess wit me cuz i will beat u up.

im teh big bad rat man.

windhound

 big bad rat man and  joe34, ye both are big annoying newbies and should be thrown as soon as possible into a fresh pile of rat dung

Quoteu're stupid. nobpody carez how i type. u cn undrestand meh, kant u?
wazzat?  I'm all confuzzled...  who/what is nobpody?  no potty?  meh.
A Goldfish has an attention span of 3 seconds...  so do I
~ In the beginning there was nothing, which exploded ~
There are only 10 types of people in the world: Those who understand binary, and those who don't