The Fractured Empires RP

[Camaclue]

because of my unimagination, this is the manename of the RP.
I'm so tired and lazy that I can't spell right
anyways, we shall start it here. You can start with describing your character and then i will take it from there.
Krowdon, since you come from the Drylands, your hometown is Palo, a trade center with many tall structures in the center and small houses on the edge.
Durza, since you live in Underland, your hometown is Overstead, a town that is home to many theives and evildoers, most of whom you know very well.
Ian, since you harbor from the Overlands, you are RICH and a warrior. Your town of Lamar is home to a famous knight and also a family who has a blood feud against another in the nearby city of Doblin.

[Krowdon]

(since I posted my info in the sign up area, can I start? and is there a specific thing  I have to start with or can I do whatever?)

[Camaclue]

(you can start by exploring your city. You start off with 1000 coins since you live in a low class empire)

[Krowdon]

(you can start by exploring your city. You start off with 1000 coins since you live in a low class empire)

(Okay. Let me see how I want to do this.)

Eleanor > Go into town and find the local apothecary. There are some ingredients/things for a necromantic ritual you are lacking, and you're hoping she has some this time. (Not quite sure what I'm doing so lets just start like this.)

[Camaclue]

(kay)
Elanor enters the local apothecary shop.
"hallo Elay," the hunched shopkeeper says, "wat canni gettayou todai?"

[Krowdon]

 " I need some Lavender, Rosemary and somt Thyme today please." Eleanor places her usual payment of 20 gold on the counter for the Shopkeeper.

[Camaclue]

The shopkeeper takes half the coins. "I getta da labeder an rossmerie, butti needa shippamint ofa time. Cann you getta it Elay? Is inna Grazzin, asoutwesta heer. I givea you whatta you needanow." With that, the old shopkeeper grabs rosemary and lavender from the back of the shop and gives them to you. You leave the shop knowing what you need and where to go.
(you gots a quest now)

[Ian2424]

What about me? Can I start yet?

[Camaclue]

(type in commas and yes you may start your adventure)

[Durza]

(these are parenthses cam :p BTW my camps season is starting so I will be on and off)

[Camaclue]

(haha I fail. Have fun then Durzak. I already have two on my hand so take as long as you must)

[Ian2424]

(Okay. But if I forget, please remind me.)

[Camaclue]

(sure thing, but let's discuss in signup)

[Ian2424]

(I guess parantheses are only for out-of-character talk?)
  Ian walked through the town [with swag B-)] and passed his his friend who owned a Weapon's Shop. He waved and kept going. Finally, he reached the palace but then some guards stepped in his way.
  "You are under arrest," they commanded.
  "But why!?," Ian inquired.
  "King's orders. Just be quiet and keep moving."
  Ian frowned as they walked him to the King.

(I'm new to this so please excuse. I suck. Badly.)
(Ps. I suck at grammar, so if the quotations marks or commas are out of place, then please tell me.)

[Camaclue]

(yes bad grammar but I'm short on time)
As Ian(overused name) was being escorted, one of the guards explained to him, "The king ordered everyone to be searched for enchanting weapons. If you're clear, then you will be released, but if not, may the gods help you."
Inside the Duke of Lamar's castle, the king walked around in a fury. "I FEEL the demonic power. It MUST BE PURGED!" The duke looked at the mad king, noting his filthy talk. As the king finished a sentence on wizard's mothers, a line of people came through the door.