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[Rakefur]

This is the first of three rp's. Road of Foxes, The Rise of Longface, and Lord of the Thirteen Blades. Start of the main plot below:

I was born into a small family in southern Mossflower. As a young hare, I was captured by a roving band of foxes, led by a self-proclaimed decedent of the Marlfoxes, Egur Dank. They traveled to the Western Sea, where the foxes stole a ship, but they were not sea-beasts, and knew nothing about sailing, so we shipwrecked on a small island, where a giant adder, Sayssiussss, ruled over a terrified population of field mice. Dank forced me into the serpent's cavewith a line of spears, where I found and killed the snake. Dank, however, closed up the the cave so I was sealed inside. I wandered the labyrinth for hours, searching for light. Fortunately, I found a small lizard, the serpent's slave, who was so thankful to the hare who had killed his harsh master that he led me out a back way. Once outside, I quickly freed the mice, but Dank and his band ambushed us. I fought bravely, but I was weak from lack of food, and was overwhelmed. I was put in a hut under close guard. But the lizard distracted the guard so I could get out. The lizard was captured and tortured and finally roasted over a fire. I, with thoughts of revenge, turned into an outlaw, wearing a black cloak and striking hard and fast, then disappearing. This went on for several months. Then one day, a ship the color of blood sailed into view. I saw this was my only chance to get back to Mossflower, so when it got dark, I climbed onto the ship and hid in the hold. For days, all I saw was barrels and sacks. Then one night, he heard the lookout call 'Land Ho!' I climbed into an empty barrel and slept. When dawn came, the ship was at anchor along the coast. But what really struck me was the volcano on the shore. It was huge! And smoke was billowing out of it. I had never seen anything like it in my life.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Rakefur Longface
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Notes:
1. It is just a plot idea. I hope to enlarge it greatly.
2. I have not included a lot about the characters; That is ok for now (see #3)
5. Please give helpful criticism. I said HELPFUL.

[Dark Claws]

Good. I like the idea. It's flowing, but you should at the least think of this:
Set a mental quota for characters in this. This is a role-play, so it will need characters. But a quick number helps you metally organize. It could be 1 billion for all it matters in this stage, but you still should set it.

[Rakefur]

OK, for characters.

Rakefur Longface (hare):
Dubruct the Bough (squirrel)

Lord Lupin (timber wolf):
Lord Tulstil the Harvester (badger):

General Phillip Welterson (hare):
Derrik Kilder (stoat):

Aarak (mouse):

[Camaclue]

I wanna be the captain! I shall be Derrik Kilder, a stoat captain. You DID say any race, right?

[Rakefur]

yesI will post a character sheet, plz post your character here

[Rakefur]

Rakefur Longface.

Age: 14 seasons

Species: hare

Gender: male

*Height: 5 foot10

Fur colour: black

*Eye colour: blue

Clothing: black tunic, cloak, hood

Weapons: 2 claymores worn on crossbelts across the back, throwing knives

Strengths: silent, fast, his own mysteriousness

Weakness: Gluttonous, lonely

Background: I was born into a small family in southern Mossflower. This where the rp starts.

Quirks: thick Scottish accent, but doesn't talk much

Other things that may be important: Land Farm worshiper, says a prayer often

*optional

[Camaclue]

Silly Rakefur, you can't sign up for your own RP. Or maybe you can...

[Rakefur]

yes I can, plz post your character sheet

[Durza]

Name: Aarak

Age: 20

Race: Mouse

gender: male

weapon: assorted daggers hidden all over

look: brown fur, green eyes, yellow tunic, book in hand

traits: always carries a book(has hidden dagger), easily bored, rather smart, rogue

[Camaclue]

okay. bossy mc boss boss.

Derrik Kilder

Age: 31 seasons

Species: Stoat

Gender: Male

Fur color(blame Rakie): light gray

Clothing: Pirate clothes. And a tricorn.

Weapons:two sabers and a throwing axe

Strengths: Can manipulate beasts easily, expert swordsman

Weaknesses: a bad limp, due to the lack of right footpaw.

Background: A traveler who went off to search for bountiful treasure.

Quirks: Likes pirate stories and songs. His favorite song is "The Beast of Pirate's Bay"

Other: Sometimes puts on a fake eyepatch and hook to either look weak or for show.

[Shadow Assassin]

Helpful criticism.

It looks good but would a snake have a slave? Wouldn't a snake just eat him?
Put more s's in the snakes name :)

[Rakefur]

OK, Cam he can't have pistols sorry :(

Gabe, that was the point, a little variety never hurt anyone.

[Camaclue]

too bad. Also, It justs depends on the kind of snake. If it wasn't venomous or it's teeth were broken in some way, then he would need a slave to feed him.

[Muse]

Okay here goes. Dont be put off b the name, he's not at all a high-ranking leader... unless you want him to be!
Lord Lupin
Species-Timber wolf
Weapon's-claws, and Spitter- a bone spear-harpoon, a bow with poison filled bone shards as shafts, twin cutlasses
Age-43
Gender-Male
Color-Only sable of his kind
Strengths-demands fealyty of all wolves, coyotes, hyenas(?), extremely wild, strong, pitiless (a gooood trait in villians!)
Weaknesses- arrogant, pitiless, wild
Background-once wolf lord of the North, ship shipwrecked, so must stay here

[Rakefur]

Nice, I guess you can be the leader of the wolves, coyotes, hyenas band that captures me.