iso opinions of my fan fic :)

Daryn · June 14, 2009, 06:17:00 PM

http://bleach.wikia.com/wiki/Ulquiorra <--info

How long had he been here?
The vasto lorde pondered as he stood at the top of a rocky outcropping in Hueco Mundo. He was the most powerful, one of the few and rare hollow lords.
Black wings folded against his broad back. His mask was like a horned helmet, with two tear like lines from his emerald green eyes, giving him a depressing air. A whip-like tail lashed the air as the vasto lorde pondered.
"Hey!"
He turned around to see a thin silver haired man strode toward him. His eyes were slits and a grin was plastered across his face.
"Who are you?" the vasto lorde growled in a melancholic monotone.
"There's no need o' that now," the man said through his grin, almost backing away at the wave of reiatsu released with the sound. He talked with a polite but indirect drawl. "I've come to you with an offer."
"Speak," the vasto lorde rumbled.
"Well my master, Aizen-sama has something that can make you stronger," the man explained. "Let's say that you might be interested."
"Ridiculous," he replied. "Nothing is stronger than vasto lorde."
"Well, let's say there is," the man grinned. "By the way, my name is Gin...Gin Ichimaru."
"What have I got to offer to you for this power?" the vasto lorde asked perplexed.
"Loyalty," Gin replied. "Just loyalty."
The vasto lorde turned his head at Gin.
"What's ya name?" Gin grinned that sadistic parody of a smile.
"Ulquiorra Cifer."

Krowdon · June 14, 2009, 06:43:02 PM

I just read the liddle part you posted (read the rest later)

It good. *claps*

Daryn · June 14, 2009, 06:47:45 PM

yay!

Krowdon · June 14, 2009, 06:49:01 PM

Nice Icon BTW.

I LOL'd the first time I saw it.

Daryn · June 14, 2009, 06:49:55 PM

Quote from: Krowdon on June 14, 2009, 06:49:01 PM
Nice Icon BTW.

I LOL'd the first time I saw it.

:)

Briar · June 14, 2009, 08:47:58 PM

see? proof you two are made for each other

Night Wolf · June 15, 2009, 04:06:04 AM

Dont make er mad though or else ye'll be clubbed with something :D

Daryn · June 15, 2009, 07:26:59 PM

me <3 Krowdon?
but i'm nerdy, boring, kind of retarded as my ava suggests...

Mr.Grimm · June 15, 2009, 07:30:26 PM

Quote from: Daryn on June 15, 2009, 07:26:59 PM
me <3 Krowdon?
but i'm nerdy, boring, kind of retarded as my ava suggests...

Oh yeah. Perfect match.

Night Wolf · June 15, 2009, 07:30:44 PM

Quote from: Daryn on June 15, 2009, 07:26:59 PM
me <3 Krowdon?
but i'm nerdy, boring, kind of retarded as my ava suggests...

LOL
Im sorry I shouldnt laugh but I cant help it...Id describe myself the same way :D :D :D

Daryn · June 15, 2009, 07:33:11 PM

briar and night wolf
daryn and krowdon....but how do you know if if i am guy/girl?
we have all heard publicly stated that night and briar and krowdon are who they are but what about me?

Krowdon · June 15, 2009, 07:42:59 PM

Your a guy I think as your name Suggests.

Just tell us and i'll share my shoes with you.

Daryn · June 15, 2009, 07:43:25 PM

Quote from: Krowdon on June 15, 2009, 07:42:59 PM
Your a guy I think as your name Suggests.

Just tell us and i'll share my shoes with you.

shoes?
yumm

Mr.Grimm · June 15, 2009, 07:45:11 PM

And if the shoes don't get you to tell us, I have ways of making you talk...

Daryn · June 15, 2009, 07:45:57 PM

Quote from: Mr.Grimm on June 15, 2009, 07:45:11 PM
And if the shoes don't get you to tell us, I have ways of making you talk...

like?