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Blood Wake

March 12, 2004, 06:33:05 PM
 i havent read it yet and want to know what you think
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IFman

#1
March 12, 2004, 07:05:37 PM
 it is a great book
I'm so tired of being lost in a world,
Where no one can find me.
I want to break free of the cage,
That has been enclosing me for too long.
I know that I am alone and no one will save me,
So I am to escape for myself.
I wander down a path,
That will go on for eternity.
I shall never reach the end,
I am trapped no matter where I go.
Though I finally manage to reach the end,
I must fight the monster inside of me to pass.
It is filled with so much anger, hate, and despair,
The only antidote is love, courage, and hope.
The three things I do not have,
And never will.
It is there that I give up,
I have nothing left but myself.
So I lay down forever,
Never going to get up again...as I fade away from all existence.

Myrhakel

#2
March 12, 2004, 08:37:14 PM
 I liked the first bit. However, all that stuff about Ben and his dog travelling around the world helping people annoyed me.  
The man
Of virtuous soul commands not, nor obeys:
Power, like a desolating pestilence,
Pollutes whate'er it touches, and obedience,
Bane of all genius, virtue, freedom, truth,
Makes slaves of men, and, of the human frame,
A mechanised automaton.

Percy Bysshe Shelley

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Nohcnonk

#3
March 12, 2004, 08:39:54 PM
 It's pretty good ^_^

IFman

#4
March 12, 2004, 08:45:21 PM
 angels command is better
I'm so tired of being lost in a world,
Where no one can find me.
I want to break free of the cage,
That has been enclosing me for too long.
I know that I am alone and no one will save me,
So I am to escape for myself.
I wander down a path,
That will go on for eternity.
I shall never reach the end,
I am trapped no matter where I go.
Though I finally manage to reach the end,
I must fight the monster inside of me to pass.
It is filled with so much anger, hate, and despair,
The only antidote is love, courage, and hope.
The three things I do not have,
And never will.
It is there that I give up,
I have nothing left but myself.
So I lay down forever,
Never going to get up again...as I fade away from all existence.

Aqualis

#5
March 13, 2004, 06:48:35 PM
 It's good, but I haven't read the Angel's Command yet.
"Less talky, more drivey." ~Hawk, Applegeeks Issue #161

~the mighta awualis

IFman

#6
March 13, 2004, 10:03:06 PM
 everyone should, it makes the world a better place
I'm so tired of being lost in a world,
Where no one can find me.
I want to break free of the cage,
That has been enclosing me for too long.
I know that I am alone and no one will save me,
So I am to escape for myself.
I wander down a path,
That will go on for eternity.
I shall never reach the end,
I am trapped no matter where I go.
Though I finally manage to reach the end,
I must fight the monster inside of me to pass.
It is filled with so much anger, hate, and despair,
The only antidote is love, courage, and hope.
The three things I do not have,
And never will.
It is there that I give up,
I have nothing left but myself.
So I lay down forever,
Never going to get up again...as I fade away from all existence.

Blood Wake

#7
March 13, 2004, 10:34:57 PM
 hurr hurr, oi havn't read either. no oi bain't
I am Emperor Cornswallow Balthazar Eradicus Shunt VII, ruler of the Blood Wake empire.

picture made by my brother Klowd19

My project, Fasba Fpel broke world records and collaborated with some incredible musicians. Download the free music or watch videos:
h

Ashyra Nightwing

#8
March 14, 2004, 08:07:26 AM
 Yiss, t'was a very good book.. *nods*

windhound

#9
March 14, 2004, 01:48:51 PM
 *noddeth*
yeppers..  good book it was..
A Goldfish has an attention span of 3 seconds...  so do I
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