A Redwall Fan-fic is better.
Chapter 1: Keita Swiftfoot the Vixen
Keita had been walking for a long time, but she would not rest till she reached her goal........Redwall Abbey.........
The vixen smiled as she recalled memories, Friends ,Family and Food!
Ding-Dong-Ding-Dong
Keita started running towards the sound, there it was Redwall Abbey.
"AHOY! Are ye Friend, Foe! or Food?"
Keita smiled then started laughing.
"Is that a Great big Pudden-headed Stream-dog Named Skipper Arfell?"
Then there was a booming laugh and the gates opened, before the Vixen had set one paw inside the gate, she had been seized in a crushing hug of joy from her buddy.
"Get off of me! Afore ye squeeze me to death!"
Then she fell to the ground, then she looked up into the face of a huge Otter. The otter had a apologetic look on his face.
" I didn't hurt ye did I mate? we gave up hope of seeing you again, we thought you were........"
Keita looked up knowing what he meant.
" If I don't get food soon you won't be able to hug me to death Skip!"
Just then the Abbey doors opened and dibbuns came pouring out.
Just before they made it to the pair ,Keita took off towards the Kitchen.
" Good Grief was that the Rascal Keita Swiftfoot? I thought she had perished long ago!"
A Mouse came walking over staring in disbelief.
Skipper replied slowly " We all did, yes we did."
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Keita looked at the Abbot.
" No Father I'm not here to stay.... I'm going to the north-lands as soon as I get Provisions and Rested, I'm going Father Abbot."
The Abbot sighed, it had been to good to be true. of course she wouldn't stay, she never had.
The abbot walked out of the room and then came back carrying Martins Sword.
" Then take this with you my child... But don't forget to stay a while longer see your old Friends."
This is introducing the main character.
Chapter 1: Keita Swiftfoot the Vixen
Keita had been walking for a long time, but she would not rest till she reached her goal........Redwall Abbey.........
The vixen smiled as she recalled memories, Friends ,Family and Food!
Ding-Dong-Ding-Dong
Keita started running towards the sound, there it was Redwall Abbey.
"AHOY! Are ye Friend, Foe! or Food?"
Keita smiled then started laughing.
"Is that a Great big Pudden-headed Stream-dog Named Skipper Arfell?"
Then there was a booming laugh and the gates opened, before the Vixen had set one paw inside the gate, she had been seized in a crushing hug of joy from her buddy.
"Get off of me! Afore ye squeeze me to death!"
Then she fell to the ground, then she looked up into the face of a huge Otter. The otter had a apologetic look on his face.
" I didn't hurt ye did I mate? we gave up hope of seeing you again, we thought you were........"
Keita looked up knowing what he meant.
" If I don't get food soon you won't be able to hug me to death Skip!"
Just then the Abbey doors opened and dibbuns came pouring out.
Just before they made it to the pair ,Keita took off towards the Kitchen.
" Good Grief was that the Rascal Keita Swiftfoot? I thought she had perished long ago!"
A Mouse came walking over staring in disbelief.
Skipper replied slowly " We all did, yes we did."
*****************************************
Keita looked at the Abbot.
" No Father I'm not here to stay.... I'm going to the north-lands as soon as I get Provisions and Rested, I'm going Father Abbot."
The Abbot sighed, it had been to good to be true. of course she wouldn't stay, she never had.
The abbot walked out of the room and then came back carrying Martins Sword.
" Then take this with you my child... But don't forget to stay a while longer see your old Friends."
This is introducing the main character.